Interesting concept!

"I thought it began in a good spot, a nice action start to draw the reader in. One part I struggled with was the part where Skye is falling. I got a little confused as to what was happened because he seemed to be falling forever, then he didn't seem like he was falling, then there was a barrier, then he could turn into smoke? I feel like this part needs to be reworked and polished so the meaning and transition of events is clearer and easier to understand. I really like the back story idea of nukes causing people to raise their city into the air because of monsters, only to find out this might not be true at all. :) So overall, I think this story has some really cool concepts, it just needs to be polished up for grammar and clearness."