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The inevitability

"This story caught my attention from the very beginning. The scene with the photograph is very descriptive and mysterious, and it made me curious immediately. I like how the author created suspense with just a simple conversation, it makes you feel like there is a deep secret behind everything. The writing is smooth and easy to follow, and the atmosphere feels very real. I could clearly imagine the setting and the tension in the room. I'm especially curious about the girl in the photograph and why she must not know the truth. So far it's a very interesting story and I look forward to reading more"

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