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What is your opinion?
Good
"Good Diffrent concept Nice"
Crime by design
"It reminded me too much of the vampire diaries. Too much reference was taken from there. The writing could of been better. Started well but changed a lot mid way. Felt like I was reading two different books. Didn't understand where the fantasy and magic came in and from. Too many unfinished scenes. Lot of lack of direction. Felt unfinished."
