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"Man I love this story!! It makes me cry, happy, laughing alot. It runs through a gamit of many emotions. Your writing is so much better then alot of authors on Galatea and Kindle. I am really sad that your stories as well as other authors are not getting the acknowledgement you should be getting. SInce I started reading on this app, I rarely read anything on Galatea or Kindle. So please keep writing and I will keep reading. ❤️"

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Pucked by my step brother

"I love this book so far I've recommended it to 12 friends and they're all reading it we sit around and talk about it at lunch I read the first 77 chapters three times because my phone is messed up and I couldn't get any further on it than that my phone is fixed now and I'm plowing through the rest of the story I would recommend this book to anyone my friends and I talked about it at night all the time we can it's great it's like I said the best book I've ever read the writing ability is amazing thank you for being with like this to us bringing books like this to us"

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Amazing

"Rarely write reviews until the book is fantastic. This is such a great read (haven't finished) and can't wait for rest of it. DEFINITELY worth the read."

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GREAT story and a pleasure to read. -

"So, I rarely write reviews. But this story is very engrossing and the characters are well defined and believable. The author can really write and write well. I am looking forward with anticipation to the upcoming chapters and how Naomi and Rhys’s story works out. As far as plot, grammar and punctuation; the plot is good and keeps you “turning the pages” with attention to spelling and punctuation. Overall, a pleasure to read. In the meantime, I am going to see what else this author has written. "

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Good read

"Easy to get to know the characters. You absolutely get to pick your favourite. Love that it doesn’t define her. "

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Hoping she gets her act together

"Ok if Naomi can’t get over the fact he got locked in the equipment room - she is unbelievable. She freaks me out. Guess that is what the author wants... but sheesh. Poor Rhys"

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Emotional rollercoaster 🎢 of a read

"Loving this book so far, I think both main characters have come a long way, each in their own ways. A story about life, love, personal struggles and the growing into the person you were always meant to be! "

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Loving this book so far

"I really like the lead male and female. They are so different yet perfect for each other"

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The Beast

"How do you win love after being hurt so badly over and over again ?"

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Loving it!

"Really enjoying it! Easy to read, fully gripped, nice and spicy too!"

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This is so good

"I can't wait for more. And I really hope that Caleb and Jade get what's coming to them."

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Excellent writing

"Good story"

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Reader

"Interesting to note that Rhys is so like Caleb but also not like him"

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