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"I first read this little story around this time last year. It was so good. It's a new year and for some reason I can't stop thinking about this book so I just downloaded this app (which I had previously deleted)all over again so I can read this book all over again💯🤲🏾"
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"I don't know why this doesn't have more likes and reviews. I have to admit, the author is amazing. No errors and a really good storyline. I would recommend this to anyone. To the author: You should really think about publishing this"
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"Hi, I just saw this and was like "Aww, no reviews?" I gotta review!!! And btw, I like reviewing, just not for prizes. This story I have to say hooked me up! Many references I know are reminded sort of like the beginning of the movie Fantastic Four, you know the protagonist is sciency and stuff like your character Abraham, whatever his name was. I am also reminded of the beginning of Percy Jackson book 1, how he tells us about his life or whatever, similar to this story. The plot is done pretty nicely here. I can see where this is going at and seems interesting too! What you need to work on however, is your summary. I think you should take advantage of the 200 word limit, because when someone decides whether or not they want to read your story or not, they read your summary. If it's interesting enough, you have reeled your readers into this wonderful story. So work on that! The story is so simple. I like that. Going to school with normal people and stuff. Hey, I write fantasy, maybe it seems extraordinary but it really is! This school story, if it is...is amazing! I like the interactions with the characters and the descriptions. I don't see any info dump. I don't see a reason why you should have one in the first place so that's good. The information is well woven into the story. I like that. It's a very smooth read. Honestly, I would recommend this to any regular person who likes regular stories. Not the sort of stories out of the ordinary. ."
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"Hi, I just saw this and was like "Aww, no reviews?" I gotta review!!! This story I have to say hooked me up! Many references I know are reminded sort of like the beginning of the movie Fantastic Four, you know the protagonist is sciency and stuff like your character Abraham, whatever his name was. I am also reminded of the beginning of Percy Jackson book 1, how he tells us about his life or whatever, similar to this story. The plot is done pretty nicely here. I can see where this is going at and seems interesting too! What you need to work on however, is your summary. I think you should take advantage of the 200 word limit, because when someone decides whether or not they want to read your story or not, they read your summary. If it's interesting enough, you have reeled your readers into this wonderful story. So work on that! The story is so simple. I like that. Going to school with normal people and stuff. Hey, I write fantasy, maybe it seems extraordinary but it really is! This school story, if it is...is amazing! I like the interactions with the characters and the descriptions. I don't see any info dump. I don't see a reason why you should have one in the first place so that's good. The information is well woven into the story. I like that. It's a very smooth read. Honestly, I would recommend this to any regular person who likes regular stories. Not the sort of stories out of the ordinary. ."
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"Hi, When I just saw this, I was like "Aww, no reviews?" I gotta review!!! This story I have to say hooked me up! Many references I know are reminded sort of like the beginning of the movie Fantastic Four, you know the protagonist is sciency and stuff like your character Abraham, whatever his name was. I am also reminded of the beginning of Percy Jackson book 1, how he tells us about his life or whatever, similar to this story. The plot is done pretty nicely here. I can see where this is going at and seems interesting too! What you need to work on however, is your summary. I think you should take advantage of the 200 word limit, because when someone decides whether or not they want to read your story or not, they read your summary. If it's interesting enough, you have reeled your readers into this wonderful story. So work on that! The story is so simple. I like that. Going to school with normal people and stuff. Hey, I write fantasy, maybe it seems extraordinary but it really is! This school story, if it is...is amazing! I like the interactions with the characters and the descriptions. I don't see any info dump. I don't see a reason why you should have one in the first place so that's good. The information is well woven into the story. I like that. It's a very smooth read. Honestly, I would recommend this to any regular person who likes regular stories. Not the sort of stories out of the ordinary. ."