Phantom Revenge by lg

Chapter 1

PHANTOM REVENGE #1

by LG (Phantom Revenge© LG 2026)

PAGE 1

panel 1: Five people are sitting in a room, all in suits for a meeting.

1 Leon: We can't stay quiet about it anymore!

2 Leon: The kid is out of control.

3 Lily: He's just a kid. An eight year old kid.

4 Joseph: A kid with superpower.

5 Leon: Superpower we haven't seen before. Powers he cannot control.

6 Gwendolyn: And what are you expecting us to do? We can't control him. He got his family to keep him in line.

Panel 2: Leon is very mad at the other members not understanding the situation.

1 Leon: We can't control him. No one can control him.

2 Leon: Should I remind you what happened at the central park birthday party last year?

3 Clara: We all remember that incident very well. It was tragic.

4 Leon: incident or not. We can't let something like that happen again.

Panel 3: Small panel. They all nod. except Leon who doesnt like this option

1 Gwendolyn: We all agree. But what are you suggesting we do?

2 Leon: I have a plan in mind.

PAGE 2

Panel 1: The Wilson family are at a water park all wearing swimming clothes. Diane is holding Zane as he walks in the toddlers swimming pool while Jake takes Ace and Milo to the big water slide. Milo reaches out towards the family at the front of the line. His hand is glowing with gray using his powers.

1 Ace: I can't wait to slide on the big water slide. It's the best!

2 Milo: The line is so long...

Panel 2: Jake, Ace and Milo are at the front of the line. The employee doesn't even play attention, they're looking at their phone. Ace is happy about it while Jake has a concerned experience.

Panel 3: Jake crouches to Milo's eye level. Milo nods while listening to Jake.

1 Jake (small text from whispering): Careful using your powers here, kiddo.

2 Jake: Now, have fun sliding down the slide.

Panel 4: Ace, Milo and Jake are sliding down the slide. Ace is at the front with his hands in the air and a big grin. Milo is behind him with a smile, his hair blowing in the wind. Behind them is Jake watching his kids carefully with a little smile.

Panel 5: Ace and Milo are in the pool splashing water on each other while Jake is at the end of the slide.

1 Ace: Stop it.

2 Milo: You picked the wrong brother to start a water fight with.

3 Jake: Oh, it's a water fight you two are looking for.

Panel 6: Jake playfully splashes water on Milo and Ace. Making them slightly annoyed.

1 Ace: Oh, no.

2 Milo: I lost the higher ground.

3 Jake: I'm the king of water fight.

PAGE 3

Panel 1: Jake approaches Diane with an exhausted expression. The sun is starting to set.

1 Jake(weakly from exhaustion): How about we switch places and you watch the big monkeys while I watch Zane?

2 Diane: I think you earned your rest with Zane.

Panel 2: Jake holds Zane and kisses his cheek making Zane giggle.

1 Jake: Did you miss daddy? Because I sure missed you, kiddo.

Panel 3: Diane is playing with Ace while Milo gets out of the pool. His hands on the floor preparing to lift himself up.

1 Milo: Mom, can I go play with the kids over there?

2 Diane: Yes, just stay in my sight.

3 Milo: Will do.

4 Ace: Mom. Look what I can do.

Panel 4: Milo approaches the kids who are playing in an inflatable water park.

1 Milo: Can I join?

2 Kid one: Sure.

Panel 5: Milo starts playing with the kids. Doing the orbit, avoiding the obstacles and gets to the top of the water park with kid one.

1 Milo: Looks like we're the only ones who got to the top.

2 Kid one: Race to the pool?

3 Milo: I'll get there before you do.

PAGE 4

Panel 1: As they start running towards the slide. Kid one slips and falls off the top of the water park. Milo reaches his right hand out towards Kid one using his powers and making his right hand glow.

1 kid one: Wow.

Panel 2: Kid one was teleported back to the top of the water park in shock. Milo has a fear expression on his face.

1 Kid one: How did you do that?

2 Milo: I... um...

Panel 3: Kid one walks towards Milo angrily while Milo walks backwards keeping distance in fear.

1 Kid one: You're one of them, aren't you?

2 Milo: No! I'm not.

3 Kid one: You're a freak like the others.

Panel 4: Kid one pushes Milo off the top of the water park to the slide.

PAGE 5

Panel 1: Milo got back to Ace and Diane looking sad. Diane petted his head. Ace is upset.

1 Milo: Mom... can we go home?

2 Diane: Yes, let's go home.

3 Ace: Aww.. but we just got here.

4 Diane: Come on, Ace. We're going home.

5 Ace: Fine.

Panel 2: Jake holds Zane in his arms walking towards Diane, Ace and Milo confused.

1 Jake: What's wrong? Milo, why are you sad?

2 Milo: I used my powers and a kid called me a freak.

Panel 3: Jake’s eyes widen up in shock and anger while Milo looks down sadly.

1 Jake: You used your powers? I warned you not to use them.

2 Milo: I had to, dad. He was falling off the top of the inflatable water park.

Panel 4: Jake sighs but understands Milo's decision now.

1 Jake: Alright then, you did the right thing, kiddo.

PAGE 6

Panel 1: The Wilson family is in their car. Jake is driving, Zane is in a booster on the passenger seat and Diane, Ace and Milo are in the back seats.

Panel 2: The car stops at an ice-cream store.

Panel 3: Jake looks at Milo through the front mirror. Milo smiles a little at Jake’s suggestion.

1 Jake: How about we get some ice cream to cheer you up, Milo?

2 Milo: Yeah, it'd be nice.

Panel 4: The Wilson family are all eating ice cream in their car. Jake and Diane have a Strawberry flavor, Ace has a mint flavor, Milo has a Vanilla flavor and Zane has a Chocolate flavor.

1 Jake: Feeling better, Kiddo?

2 Milo: Yeah. It's delicious. Thanks, Dad.

3 Jake: Anytime, Son.

Panel 5: The car is moving again.

1 Jake(off): Now that we are all happy. Let's go home.

Panel 6: Zoom in on Milo who looks upset again.

1 Milo: Dad. Are we really freaks?

PAGE 7

Panel 1: Jake looks at Milo through the front mirror of the car. He looks angry about Milo needing to ask that question.

1 Jake: No. No. We're not freaks.

2 Milo(off): then why every time I use my powers, everyone calls me a freak?

3 Jake: We are different and humans fear what is different from them.

4 Milo(off): But different doesn't mean bad.

Panel 2: Jake smiles wildly after hearing Milo’s response.

1 Jake: That's true. But unfortunately most people don't think this way, or at all. They would follow the crowd or jump to conclusions without thinking, without considering a different option.

2 Milo(off): That's Unfortunate.

3 Jake: I agree.

Panel 3: Jake goes to the kitchen while Milo goes up stairs. Ace and Diane are standing near the door. Diane holds Zane in her arms.

1 Caption: At the Wilson’s house.

2 Diane: I'm going to put Zane to sleep.

3 Jake: Alright. Ask for help if you need it.

Panel 4: Milo stops at the first step as he realizes he forgot something important.

1 Milo: I forgot to finish my science project.

2 Diane: Better get to it.

3 Milo: Yes, mom.

PAGE 8

Panel 1: Jake sips his cup of tea in the kitchen while Milo finishes his science project on the coffee table in the living room.

1 Jake: What's your project about?

2 Milo: I'm making a volcano. I use glitter for the ashes.

3 Jake: That's a clever way to make ash. Just stay careful with it.

Panel 2: view from above. Milo spills the bottle of glitter on the table.

1 Milo: Nooo... I spilled the glitter on the table.

2 Jake: I will get the vacuum cleaner.

Panel 3: Jake stops as he sees some glitter in the air looking like they are on a shoe.

1 Jake(small text. Small bubble from whispering): What the—

Panel 4: Zoom in on a Yari reaching out towards Milo.

PAGE 9

Panel 1: Milo was teleported, sitting on the kitchen counter. Jake wraps his arms around Milo.

Panel 2: Jake is holding Milo with a worried expression on his face while Diane looks confused.

1 Caption: In Jake and Diane's bedroom

1 Jake(small text, small bubble from whispering): There's someone in the house.

2 Diane(small text, small bubble from whispering): How did they get in?

3 Jake(small text, small bubble from whispering): I don't know. But we gotta get the kids out of here.

Panel 3: The bedroom door is swung open revealing Jake and Diane's bedroom empty.

1 Invisible Man: How did he notice me? Ah, I got ₪#! Glitter on my shoe.

Panel 4: The invisible man cleans his shoe but gets some glitter on his hand.

1 Invisible Man: Come on. I hate glitter

Panel 5: The invisible man cleans his hand.

1 Jake(off): Alright. What do you want? Who even are you? And how did you get in?

2 Invisible Man: I'm not here for you.

3 Jake(off): show yourself!

4 Invisible man: I rather not. This makes my job WAY easier.

PAGE 10

Panel 1: Focusing on Jake grinding his teeth. His hand forms a fist.

1 Jake: I will find you and make you regret coming here.

2 Invisible man: I don— OWW! That's my nose. You broke my damn nose!

Panel 2: Zoom in on 2 blood lines.

1 Jake(off): Save your breath to cry about other parts of your body being broken.

Panel 3: Jake was pushed away. He’s leaning against the kitchen counter facing the invisible man and holds his waist.

1 Invisible Man: The kid got it from you, didn't he? I'm surprised you have a wife and kids. Your kind disgusts me.

2 Jake: Kid? You're after Milo then. I won't let you get near my family.

Panel 4: Jake goes upstairs, following the 2 visible blood lines of the invisible man.

Panel 5: Jake slams the invisible man against the wall leaving cracks on it.

1 Jake: Get out of my house.

PAGE 11

Panel 1: Jake gets knocked back. The invisible man pulls out his Yari.

1 Invisible Man: I'm doing a favor to the world. One less from your kind would make the world a better place.

Panel 2: Jake catches the Yari that was about to hit his eyes.

1 Invisible Man: I won't miss next time.

2 Jake: There won't be a next time.

3 Invisible Man: Your kind is so stupid.

Panel 3: The invisible Man cuts Jake's chest.

1 Jake: AHHHH

Panel 4: Jake is on his knees with 2 extra pairs of arms.

1 Invisible Man(off): What is wrong with your kind?

Panel 5: Zoom in on Jake's mouth open revealing 4 sharp fangs.

1 Jake: I'm done playing games.

PAGE 12

Panel 1: The invisible man defends himself with the Yari holding it diagonally to defend himself from Jake's attack which makes him hold the Yari too.

Panel 2: Zoom in on Jake bites the base of the Yari, breaking it in half.

Panel 3: Zoom in on Jake headbutt the invisible man.

Panel 4: Zoom in on Jake knee striking the invisible man.

PAGE 13

Panel 1: The invisible man's invisibility wears off. The watch on his wrist is broken and the wall behind him is broken. The invisible man spat a little blood on the floor.

1 Jake(off): You. You're Leon Smith. You're supposed to keep humans safe.

2 Leon: Exactly. And you're no human.

Panel 2: Leon stabs Jake's chest with the blade part of the Yari.

1 Jake: Aaarghhhh

Panel 3: Leon bursts through the front door.

PAGE 14

Panel 1: Milo is facing Diane with a scared expression.

1 Milo: Mom.. when is dad coming back? It's been—

Panel 2: Milo looks down at his torso and sees a knife went through it.

1 Diane(off): MILO!!!

Panel 3: Leon pulls out his knife looking proud of himself. Diane is angry with tears in her face, holding Zane in her arms.

1 Diane: What have you done?!! Stay away from me! Stay away from my kids!!!