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Amazingly written

"Amazing story like with sensual descriptions and deep connections between the characters. It’s a great read and even better story with a good laugh or two. Absolutely would recommend to those who love short stories with an impactful story line. Love it ꨄ"

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Hot

"Really good written. I liked the build up, even if i wasn't sure in the beginning what Jaspers thoughts were. Really good"

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Good

"Excellent short story"

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deeply erotic

"I love hove the story combines the touches, the deep satisfaction, the anticipation, the vulnerability in an extreme erotic experience. ❤️❤️❤️"

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Deep Tissue

"Wow! Absolute suspense, nerve-wrecking PLEASURE! beautifully written short story. ❤️ "

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I think I need a massage

"Soo sensual and sexy. Loved it "

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🔥🔥🔥🔥

"This is the kind of show burn I like. It still gives you something every time without getting boring or lost in the abyss... looking forward to reading more from this author!"

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Deep tissue

"Excellent detailed writing, "

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OMG

"Beautiful"

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Deep tissue

"I like how direct the writer is..I also appreciate good grammar and choice of words..it's short and 🔥 hot..I love it.Great work "

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Good

"I like the speed and how it's not too fast, plot is ok, and writing skills are great especially when explaining the tension between the characters"

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First experience and already looking for the next

"I found this author through one of our shared friends and holy cow. The details. The slow sensual build. The prose. I just wow! Im already looking for their next book to devour!"

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Hits all the pleasure points

"For a story about massage, I appreciate its methodical pacing and attention to detail. The anatomical descriptions are vivid and sexy. The best part is that it builds to a sweet and satisfying happy ending. Thanks for the great story, Ozan!"

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Sexy and arousing

"I'm not gay but I loved this story, and I even joined them in bed 😘 Thank you for sharing."

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Almost gave up

"This one almost made me give up. So good. Love it. "

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Love it

"I liked everything about it the buildup the characters everything I would recommend it to someone who’s looking for intimacy in a level some people don’t understand I gave this reading  cause I liked it it made me feel things and it’s good."

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Nice. I’m enjoying this new one ☝️ interesting 📕 book.

"Good read so far. Learning about different types of things is really interesting and helps me understand. "

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Great quick erotic read

"I really enjoyed this short! Romantic with a good pace and build up, erotic, and very sensual 💜 definitely recommend it. Great work author, definitely was a wonderful read"

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Deep Tissues

"I like the writing. the punctuation is accurate too."

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Body2Body

"This is steamy and erotic. Its very Emmanuel Jade garden type but loved it so much."

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