Good start!

"Hi JBashknight, I read your supernatural story and I must say that it is a very interesting story. But first of all, compliments. I liked how you played with the concept of Qi, the spiritual energy. You used this term in a way that defined the rebirth of your protagonist. So in other words, we get the sense of feeling that its a very powerful energy from the way you defined it in your story, so good for you on that. Your blurb is interesting, a god dying. It instantly attracted me right away. It isn't easy to find a story that has that hook. As for my critique, your introduction is rather odd, so it seems weird compared to the first chapter because the way you start it off has the same tone as the introduction until Pangu is chased by the gods. I feel that the intro may not be necessary and that you can weave in your world as Pangu goes along because Pangu is learning anyways. But its also totally fine that you introduce all the nitty gritty of your story. Just watch your first chapter because the tone of it is so much like the introduction. Just the beginning of it anyways. Your title is very interesting, because Chaos does exists in multiple mythologies, such as Egyptian mythology, Greek Mythology, Norse Mythology, and a lot more others that I spare to mention. And in this context, you used Asian mythology and sort of adapted it into some sort of Rick Riordan sort of thing, but in like an Asian context and background. Pangu, your protagonist I feel has been chosen quite carefully as he is the creator in Asian Mythology. So this quality you give your gods to have flawed human qualities give your audience interest and by itself is interesting. However, on the contrary, because Chaos exists in multiple mythologies, you might want to tweak your title to fit this Asian Mythology context because your title Primal Chaos doesn't take the mythology from Greek, or Egypt, or Norse. That would be just a suggestion for you to take in. Overall, very interesting story so far. I like how Pangu is stripped of his power because he caused it himself to avenge himself. I look forward to reading the rest of your story!"