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Speechless and traumatising ❤️‍🩹

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Recommended short story

"There's genius in the way the author writes. She builds the tension by piecing questions with anticipation of what's coming next and what the answer would be in the end. But slowly the build-ups gets their own well founded endings, so there's nothing left hanging; and I like that, especially since this a short story. I love the portrayal of the characters. And how even the number of the characters became part of portrayal of the story itself. The dialogues are witty, and the ending have hitting lines. It's good. I think many would enjoy the story. "

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This story is a gem!

"Honestly I’m afraid of anything horror or paranormal, but the story is just so good that I kept scrolling to read more 😂 I’m glad my fear didn’t take over because this story is a gem. This is a must read! Every chapter gets more intense and gives me a feeling I can’t even put into words"

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