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"Really easy read, didnt expect some twists."

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Great

"I am enjoying your book very much. Thank you for the constant updates. It's such a good story. "

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Intriguing

"Hints dropped along the way, desperate to know more. Unfolding a bit slowly. Please write more soon!"

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Daughters of ash & tide

"Struggling with the wording of this story and wondering when its going to end"

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Great plot

"The story is unique and very interesting. Unlike many fantasy novels, it does not disappoint or is predictable. The Author likes to be repetitive, emphasis on inner dialogue and thoughts rather than allowing the reader to discover the beautiful twists and turns of the plot through descriptions without too much commentary. But I believe that might just be my style preference. All in all very nice read. "

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