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My Ghost Architect System: Building a Haunted Park With Real Ghosts

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Summary

Adaora lost all her savings to an online scam and returned home with nothing. The only thing her grandfather left her was a ruined heritage park near Enugu. On the first night inside the abandoned building, a strange device appeared. Ghost Architect System Activated. Mission: Build the most terrifying haunted park in Nigeria… using real ghosts.

Genre
Horror
Author
JC SNOW
Status
Complete
Chapters
72
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

CHAPTER 1 THE INHERITANCE OF RED DUST

The iron legs of the cot creaked as Adaora shifted her weight.


The sound echoed around the small administrative office and faded into the damp concrete walls. Outside, the wind moved across the hills with a dry whisper, pushing thin clouds of red dust against the cracked windows.


Adaora stared at her hands.


They trembled slightly.


Not from fear.


From hunger.


On the table beside her sat a small bowl of burnt rice. The grains had hardened into a blackened lump, but she forced herself to eat anyway.


Food was becoming a calculation.


Every cup of rice had to last.


Every sachet of water mattered.


Three months ago, she had been in Onitsha trying to start a small online supply business. Nothing big just buying goods in bulk and selling them through WhatsApp groups and local contacts.


She had never travelled much. Never done anything risky before.


But everyone said the same thing.


You must invest money to make money.


That was how she first heard about the platform.


At first it sounded ridiculous.


Thirty percent returns in one month.


But people she trusted were already talking about it.


Her church members.


Her cousin.


Even her neighbor who sold electronics.


They all showed her proof.


Screenshots.


Bank alerts.


Withdrawals.


It reminded her of the stories people used to tell about the MMM scheme years ago how people doubled their money overnight before everything collapsed.


But this platform looked different.


Modern.


Professional.


The website had dashboards, customer support, even video tutorials explaining how profits were generated.


She hesitated for weeks before investing.


At first she put in ₦50,000.


The profit arrived exactly two weeks later.


Then she added ₦200,000.


Again, the profit came.


By the time she realized something was wrong, she had already moved almost everything she owned into the platform.


Her savings.


Her business funds.


Even part of the inheritance her grandfather left her.


Then one morning the website stopped loading.


The Telegram group vanished.


The support number stopped connecting.


Within two days the truth spread online.


Another Ponzi collapse.


Another ghost company.


Billions of naira gone.


Adaora lost almost ₦3.2 million.


For many people that might not sound like much.


But for her it was everything she had spent years saving.


Now the only thing left in her name was a forgotten piece of land in the Udi Hills.


Her grandfather’s heritage park.


She hadn't even known it still existed until the lawyer contacted her.


The place had once been built as a historical attraction.


Now it was little more than abandoned buildings scattered across a quiet stretch of red hills.


Most locals avoided it.


They said the land was restless.


Adaora had assumed that was just village superstition.


Until she moved in.


She stood and swept her flashlight across the dusty office.


Old furniture lay overturned in the corners. The ceiling fan hung crookedly from a rusted rod.


The beam stopped when it reached a large iron safe embedded into the floor.


She had discovered it earlier that afternoon while clearing debris.


Thick chains wrapped around the metal door as if someone had tried to seal it permanently.


Her grandfather used to say strange things before he died.


"Some places remember the past too well."


Adaora had never understood what he meant.


She picked up the sledgehammer leaning against the wall.


CRACK.


The metal lock bent.


CRACK.


Rust flaked away.


CRACK.


Finally the latch snapped open.


Adaora pulled the safe door wide.


Inside there was no money.


No documents.


Just a black rotary telephone wrapped in a yellow cloth.


She frowned.


“That’s it?”


The phone looked very old.


The kind that used a spinning dial instead of buttons.


Curious, she picked it up.


The moment her fingers touched the plastic


A sharp shock shot up her arm.


Adaora jerked back.


The rotary dial began spinning slowly by itself.


Then the phone started to change.


The plastic softened like melting wax.


The body folded inward, reshaping itself.


Within seconds the device transformed into a thin black slab that looked like polished glass.


Cold light flickered across its surface.


Green words slowly appeared.


SYSTEM INITIALIZING


Candidate detected.


User: Adaora Nnaji


Status: Unassigned


Adaora stared at it.


Her first thought was simple.


This cannot be real.


She placed the device on the table and stepped away.


For several minutes nothing else happened.


Finally the screen flickered again.


Daily Sign-In Available


Current Funds Detected: ₦1,200


Accept Assistance?


Adaora narrowed her eyes.


“No,” she muttered.


“I’m not falling for another scam.”


She unplugged the battery from her phone and searched the strange device for a SIM slot.


Nothing.


No buttons.


No charging port.


No brand name.


Just smooth black glass.


She left it on the table and walked out.


The next day she searched the internet.


Nothing.


No company.


No product.


No similar device.


She checked hidden cameras around the office.


None.


The day after that she tried smashing it with a hammer.


The hammer cracked instead.


By the third night curiosity had replaced fear.


She picked up the device again.


The screen lit instantly.


Daily Sign-In Available


This time the message changed.


Trial Assistance Available


Reward: ₦50,000


Conditions Apply.


Adaora stared at the number.


₦50,000.


Not enough to be suspiciously huge.


But enough to matter.


“What do you want me to do?” she whispered.


The screen shifted.


New text appeared.


MISSION AVAILABLE


THE SILENT TELEGRAPH


Location: Bunker Udi Hills


Objective:


Remain inside the bunker for 2 hours.


Rules:


• Do not speak


• Do not leave the marked circle


Historical Record:


A telegraph operator waited for a signal that never arrived.


Transmission continues.


Reward: ₦50,000


Adaora looked toward the hills outside.


She had noticed a concrete structure there during the day.


Half buried in the slope.


She remembered thinking it looked like an old war bunker.


Her grandfather loved collecting historical sites.


Maybe this was one of them.


Adaora hesitated.


If the device was fake, nothing would happen.


If it was real…


Then someone or something was asking her to enter a bunker where a ghost might be waiting.


She sat down and stared at the screen for a long time.


The wind outside rattled the window frame.


Finally she stood.


Not because she believed it.


But because she needed answers.


She grabbed a piece of chalk from a storage shelf and stepped into the cold night.


The red soil of the Udi Hills clung to her sandals as she walked.


The bunker entrance appeared ahead.


A rusted iron door sealed the opening.


Heavy chains wrapped around the handle.


Adaora lifted the sledgehammer.


CRACK.


The chain broke.


The iron door groaned open.


A wave of stale air rushed out.


It smelled like rust and dust.


Adaora stepped inside.


Behind her


The door slammed shut.


The black device lit up in her hand.


MISSION START


01:59:59


Deep inside the bunker…


A telegraph key tapped once.


Then again.


As if someone had been waiting a very long time


for someone to listen.


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author

Thank you 😊 very much. I am so happy you love my story. you can share the story. No comic at the moment. I will like to make comics in the near future. And you are welcome 🤗.

7 months
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this chapter is same as before but the ch2 is not connected as u have changed the story author😐

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