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Powerful story and deep thoughts

""Your story is terrifyingly good and powerful. However, I believe that taking one's own life is a sign of weakness and lack of will. A real human should strive to live; there will always be someone who loves them. Suicide is just a cowardly escape from life's trials. Keep writing, you have a great talent!""

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