What is your opinion?
After years of being away am not disappointed,I love every thing
"I will recommend to all my friends and I loved the building of characters "
Excellent
"First - I ADORE an edited story! Can't get enough. This is special. I love the play on Wizard of Oz. Could it have been longer? Sure. Could it have had more development of the characters? Definitely. Still, for what I class as a short story, I enjoyed the theme, the concepts, the characters personalities, the setting, and the ending - before the cliffhanger - was great, too. Would read more from this author. "
Great book
"Ive really enjoyed this story, lovely balance of plot, intrigue, eroticism and character building. Its an easy reading story thats hard to put down. The author does a great job of creating the images in your mind. Well written and lined up for a book 2 but without feeling like this one is missing something."
AliFunk
"I very much enjoyed this story. I read to escape from reality and enjoy the fantasy and happy ending. Thank you."
Love it!
"I like how the story is building."
Good short story
"Good short read"
Love it
"I love the rif on a classic that we all grew up with. Only a few grammatical errors to be noted and not really sure what the plot is. However I am loving the journey along the way so far."
The Queen of Oz
"Loved it definitely didn't see it coming to the way it did. Was not expecting her to hook up with all 4 of them I for sure thought she'd only want Jace. Guess I was partially right lol. Keep up the great stories. "
Great book, but need more Drama
"The relationships between the 5 were excellent. The story kept me interested. I just could not put it down. What was missing was more of the fight for polygamy releationship. A story line with her ex trying to destory what they accomplish. What if he told her parents about the Queen of Oz and the 4 Kings. I see lots of sub-plots that could make the quints fight among themselves, their families, and their Ex's."
Test subject 1&2
"From the first page to the last this book grabs you and holds you and makes you think about all the dirty nasty fantasies that we have but nobody ever says."
Nice build up
"Good build up, strong female lead, a bit cliche which i don't mind"
Perfectly spicy
"Great writing, excellent plot and the burning desire between the characters is delicious!"
Fantastic read
"I enjoyed this version of the Kingdom of Oz. Many do fanfiction and get it wrong. My five rating is the first I've given. The way this tale was spun was a success. What an amazing read!"
Cozy.
" Truly enjoyed reading your book. No disappointments."
The Queen of Oz
"I loved this story so much! Thank you Persefone! ♥️"
The Queen of Oz
"This was soooooo good! I liked the immediate possession and respect of these four for her. Truly delicious 😋 Book 2 please 🙏 😀"
Nice and short
"Short reverse harem story. Well defined characters, straight plot without holes and clean. Nice and hot short read without missing quality"
A little far-fetched, but very entertaining
"I love the pace of the story, and the originality of the plot. Although sometimes a little over the top, it could be even more entertaining if this was just turned down a little bit. But overall, very good 👍 "
The Queen of Oz
"Short and sweet. There was room to add depth and the chapters felt too short. That being said, it was an easy read and a good story. "
It was ok
"A little too immature for my tastes. The sex was pretty bland in the end. Decent writing, though."
