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"A tale of the ages. Staying the night in a haunted house for some cash. I like the spin on this one, the end surprised me. I think if this was polished up a bit it would be a very good story. Could use some work, but overall it's a cool story to tell around a campfire, which are the best horror stories, in my honest opinion."

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