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Suspenseful Beginning

"An intense and mysterious start to the story. The author’s writing style makes the suspense, twists, and eerie moments very engaging.Can’t wait to read what happens in Chapter 2."

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Supermario

"Awesome story by a future script writer 👏🏼 👏🏼"

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Great first chapter

"This was such an engaging start. The way the author describes the setting and Alice’s thought process really brings the scene to life. Alice already feels like a fascinating character — a chaotic genius with a sharp mind. The little hints about the case and the conversation with Steve build curiosity really well. I’m definitely excited to see where this story goes next."

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