Chapter 1 ~ Dún na Sceire
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The road to Dún na Sceire narrowed until it felt less like a road and more like a decision. Sorcha eased her foot off the accelerator. The car rolled over loose gravel that shifted under the tires with a dry, uneven sound. Hedges pressed close on both sides, thin, tangled branches brushing softly against the doors when the road curved too tightly.
She found herself holding the steering wheel more firmly than necessary, her fingers tightening against the leather before she noticed and eased her grip. She hadn’t even been thinking about the house.
Through breaks in the greenery, the sea appeared and disappeared. It was grey and flat beneath a sky that looked undecided about rain. The air from the cracked window carried a faint trace of salt. It wasn’t strong, but it reminded her how close the water was, even when she couldn’t see it.
She had expected the house to announce itself—maybe a wide clearing or a long open view of the cliffs. Instead, it emerged quietly. One moment, there were only trees. Next, a manor of pale stone stood between them. Its shape was solid but restrained, as though it had grown there rather than been built.
She slowed without meaning to, her attention catching on the shape of it, on the way it seemed to belong there too easily. She wasn’t sure what she’d expected, but it wasn’t that.
Dún na Sceire looked cared for. The windows were intact, with clean glass. The gravel drive was raked smooth except for a few scattered leaves. Low hedges edged the front garden, trimmed neatly, and Sorcha noticed a line of fresh clippings along one side of the lawn. Someone had been here recently. Not long enough to leave a sense of warmth behind, but long enough to leave marks of attention.
She parked near the front steps and sat for a moment, her hands resting in her lap. The quiet settled around her more completely now that the engine had stopped. For a second, she considered checking her phone again, though she knew what she would find. Instead, she remained where she was, giving herself a moment longer before stepping into something she hadn’t yet defined.
The sound of the sea drifted up from somewhere below, a distant, steady rush that didn’t match the stillness around the house. It made the building feel slightly removed from its surroundings, like a photograph placed over a moving scene.
Her phone buzzed as she checked the time. One bar of signal appeared, then disappeared.
She set the phone back down and opened the car door.
As Sorcha stepped out of the car, she opened the boot and reached for her suitcase, its wheels catching briefly on the uneven gravel. She had packed enough clothes for days rather than hours—and the weight of it tugged at her arm as she pulled it free.
Before she could straighten, a man appeared from the side of the house, his sleeves rolled up, his movements practiced.
“I’ll take that for you,” he said, already reaching for the handle.
She hesitated for half a second, then let go.
“Thank you.”
He lifted it easily and headed toward the door without waiting, the suitcase rattling softly behind him.
A woman was waiting at the entrance. Sorcha hadn’t seen her approach. She stood just inside the shelter of the doorway, tall and composed, her weight balanced evenly on both feet. Her coat was a muted grey, heavy wool that fell straight to her knees, and her dark hair was pulled back smoothly from her face.
There was nothing soft about her posture, but nothing tense either. It was simply controlled. Sorcha felt the impression of it immediately, something measured, deliberate, before she set the thought aside.
“Ms. Quinn,” she said.
Her voice was calm, lightly accented, and clear enough that it didn’t need to be raised.
“Yes,” Sorcha replied, adjusting the strap of her bag on her shoulder as she walked toward her.
“I’m Eleanor Whitmore. Welcome to Dún na Sceire.”
They shook hands. Eleanor’s palm was warm, her grip firm but brief. Sorcha noticed that her nails were short and clean, unpainted. Her fingers were steady. The grip lingered just long enough for Sorcha to register it before it was gone.
“I trust the drive wasn’t too difficult?” Eleanor asked.
“It was… quiet,” Sorcha said after a moment. It was the word that came most easily.
Eleanor’s mouth curved into a small smile. “Yes. People tend to forget we’re out here at all.”
Inside, the air was cooler. The scent of old wood and polish lingered faintly, not unpleasant, but noticeable. The entrance hall was wide without being grand, with a high ceiling that was neither ornate nor elaborate. Light filtered through tall windows, catching in small particles of dust that floated lazily in the air.
Eleanor moved ahead, her steps soft on the floor. “Your room is in the guest wing. We’ve tried to make everyone as comfortable as possible while the restoration work continues.”
Sorcha followed, her eyes drawn to the details along the walls. Some of the doors they passed were newly painted, the wood smooth and unmarked. Others were older, their surfaces worn down around the handles, as if shaped by years of hands. Small brass plaques marked several of them, though not all. The house felt like a place that had been adjusted and readjusted, rather than redesigned.
“Most of the house is open,” Eleanor continued as they turned down a long corridor. “There are a few upper floors we’ve had to close for safety reasons. I’m sure you understand.”
Sorcha nodded. She did. Buildings with history always came with parts that were less cooperative than others.
The guest wing was quieter, the air slightly cooler. The carpet muffled their footsteps. Eleanor stopped near the end of the hall and opened a door.
“This will be yours.”
The room was simple and clean. A narrow desk sat beneath the window, and a single armchair faced the bed. Outside, the trees formed a thick line of green, their leaves stirring slightly in the breeze. Sorcha stepped inside and set her bag down near the foot of the bed.
“If you need anything at all, just let one of the staff know,” Eleanor said. “We’ll be gathering for dinner this evening. It will give you a chance to meet the others.”
“The others?” Sorcha asked, turning back toward her.
“Your fellow guests. Everyone who will be contributing to the project has been invited to stay on-site. We thought it would be more efficient that way.”
Sorcha gave a small, polite smile. “I see. I look forward to it.”
Eleanor inclined her head. “We’ll see you this evening, then.”
The door closed softly behind her.
Sorcha remained where she was for a moment, listening. The house had a way of holding sound. Somewhere far down the corridor, a door opened and shut. Something creaked above her, a slow, tired noise.
She moved to the window and rested her hands on the sill. The trees beyond were thick enough to hide the cliffs from view, but she could sense their presence all the same. Beyond them, the sea continued its distant movement, unseen but constant.
The room felt neutral. Not welcoming, not cold. Simply ready to be used.
She unpacked slowly, placing her notebook on the desk, hanging her coat in the wardrobe. When she was done, she stood in the centre of the room and took one more look around.
For now, it was just a place.
But places, she knew, had a way of becoming something else once people filled them. She stood there a minute longer, as if waiting to see what this one might become.