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Our Third Chance

"Hello author!!! I have read this story more than thrice already and I still couldn't get over it! I love how you created the story plot and how everything was put into place at the end! Of all the stories that I saved, this is my most favorite! Thank you for this! Though only 20 chapters but it had a LOT to say! I hope you could write more stories like this--full of emotions and yet heartwarming..."

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Good story

"Interesting story simple but emotional, narrative is good and the words chosen to express the character's feelings are very nice."

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Our third chance

"Awesome Novel, really loved the writing style , well presented. Good grammar& punctuation .Excellent story line . Well done Trudi "

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Great story

"Love to recommend to others."

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Nice story

"Simple plot.... Getting a third chance is very special. The secrets we keep. Strong characters"

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Good work!

"Loved reading the story.Sweet and Emotional.Good work Author."

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OUR THIRD CHANCE

"This was a fantastic book well put together.I wasn't looking for the happy ending, I was sure she would walk away. surprise! Thank you for your time and effort. I really enjoyed this book. CHEERS, Richard"

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So lovely

"I loved the longing for each other. The tension. The romance. Just a lovely story I had to read in one go. The ‘fucks’ were unnecessary and jarred a bit."

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Sweet

"It's a nice heartwarming story"

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our third chance

"loved it! covered so many things that make a story unforgettable. they deserve a long good life together. thank you for sharing this story with us."

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Good book.

"I enjoyed this. Light, sweet. Well done. "

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Great Read

"I’ll be the first to admit that I’m usually not a fan of the whole 'second, third, or fourth chance' romance trope. Honestly, half the time it feels like I’m just reading a Hallmark movie script, super cheesy, totally predictable, and usually just a bit too sugary for my taste! But somehow, this story completely won me over. I absolutely fell in love with the writing style. It felt so authentic and kept me hooked from the start. At first, I was a little worried we were only going to see things through Amber’s eyes, and while I love a good internal monologue, I was craving more. Then, the plot really started to pick up steam, and we finally got to see things from Alexander’s perspective. Let me tell you, that was such a game-changer! Getting his side of the story, especially understanding the real, messy and sad reasons behind that second breakup, made the whole narrative so much more powerful. It turned a good story into a seriously compelling one. I’m genuinely so happy they found their way back to each other and got that 'happily ever after' they deserved. If I had one tiny critique, it’s just that I’m a total sucker for a long-term epilogue. I would have loved it if we could have fast-forwarded a few years to see them settled down and maybe even starting a little family of their own. I just want to know they’re still thriving! But honestly, that’s just me being greedy because I didn't want the story to end. Aside from that, I have absolutely nothing but high praise for this one. It was a total delight!"

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Our Third Chance

"Twelve years later and they still loved each other, cute story "

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Eva

"I don't like stories like this. Love was worth everything. If they had talked, they could have found a way, career or school. That's why they say "in good times and bad." A future isn't built on career alone. Twelve years were lost, and emotional and psychological damage was done. If they had stayed together, they could have recovered faster and continued on their paths together. Anyway, it had a happy ending. If I were in the girl's place, I would have made him suffer a little too. 😁"

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Our third chance

"Great story. I cried more than once. You make the story feel so real"

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A wonderful real story

"It made me cry. It made me laugh. It was real. The characters were like real people who make stupid decisions that shape their lives. But in the end love prevailed and I loved that."

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❤️❤️❤️❤️

"Love the ending ❤️"

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Our Third Chance

"🥰 You never disappoint, another great piece work. Loved the characters and their beautiful love story. "

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Our Third Chance

"Love was never in doubt. An emotional journey for a sweet love story. "

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“Our third chance” : A love story that will tug at your heartstrings

"A touching love story of two people finally finding their way back to each other again. Sweet, spicy, romantic, with a little bit of drama and angst, you will cry, laugh, and swoon over the story of Xander and Amber. This story will make you believe that if two people are destined to be together, fate will find a way to bring them back to each other. Highly recommended read for hopeless romantics like me! ❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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