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"I have been silently reading this story, glad I did. Though, I was expecting more in the end but kinda understand why you choose to do it this way, guess that is what the story is all about from the beginning. Not sure how you managed to pull it off in a 20-chapter writing which was impressive. 👌🏻"

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"Tbh, I was really hoping for a happy ending after getting traumatised by the previous one. But dang, this one's ending hurts even more now. I literally searched two or three times to see if there was another episode left or if there's going to be more, just hoping for a happy ending🤡🥲 The writing is amazing, but my heart is genuinely aching😭😭"

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Hi Author

"Recently joined inkitt and found your story from featured. It really gave me a good first impression to use the app 🙂 I like your writing style, it is easy to read and imagine the scenarios and characters, got me hooked from the beginning. The dialogues are so good, I took them in saving for future purposes ~ Good luck with your stories."

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Idk girl i hope this is the review part

"The story is well-made, fun, and exciting. I like how love wins even if you’re a different being or a human. I also love how the characters have distinct personalities, especially Cole. I like how the MC feels like Frieren—just someone who is patiently waiting and watching. I feel like that's the kind of wisdom you need moving through this world. I honestly finished this in one sitting because I like WLW stories, though I felt like a bit of a masochist hoping it wouldn't be doomed yuri. But yeah, this short novel is worth reading if you like love stories and being emotional.❤️ -月亮 "

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"I'm honestly painfully attached to these characters! They're so lovable, distinctive, and uniquely created—especially 'Cole.' She's such a breath of fresh air. I love her personality and sense of humor. The plot is also such a rare find—it's so compelling that it practically pulls you into the next chapter. It's easy to read and understand. The pacing is smoothly done. I recommend this, so please read it, y'all! Great job, baby HUHH!?? feeling LT 🤣😘"

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LOVEE THIS

"Rarely do I find stories I actually like and fw. This story was easy to read, I love the characters. You all got to give this story a chance. Put it in your reading list, you won't regret it. I hope for the next part 😭🙏 this kind of plot and story is unique for me. I have read many stories before and often I find similar themes in them. This one is unique, and surprisingly I like it despite my reach for familiar ones. Love how the lines delivered and how we were given a compelling and rich inner dialogue in the same literary tongue of the character itself. It truly delivered. ★★★★★ - immersive inner monologue and voice consistency ★★★★★ - unique plot theme, story is easy to read and flows almost flawlessly as the story develops ★★★★★ - characters are well developed, it's not lacking in that department either Good job, author. :)"

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