Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

More please

"I love all your stories.....more please "

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Esme

"I'm really enjoying the story at this point."

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Very confusing and dissatisfying

"Constant cheating, very chaotic. The plot never really deepens from the first chapter. (Main character quickly signs a contract, marrying a man who has many lovers. She falls in love with him but is too rash and quick-tempered to ever talk to him about it or request to amend their contract.) Many grammatical errors."

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The unexpected marriage contract

"Very confusing, who is she supposed to love. "

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