Another good start, lots of potential

"I like the characters so far, the POV of the situation, first between the guys and then Lillith, contrast well. At this point, end of chapter 9, Xavier and Cole don't have a whole lot of perceptible differences yet, but I'm looking forward to following the story as it evolves. One note however, the location, circumstances, and lack of parental supervision is the same as the author's other "Knot" story. Are these stories going to be more about how this cabin happens to brings alpha and omega step-siblings together? Guess we'll have to wait and see."