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Brilliant storytelling and deep concepts.

"I really liked this concept. It shows a glimpse of a future that is bitter but true. People should definitely read this."

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When nature fell silent

"This was something of a short story combined with a sense of poetry. An empath in a sterile future world. An anomaly seeking other anomalies. This story is about a creepy future describing the loss of our humanity and the living environment that defined us too. You are left with questions rather than answers. The fact that there may be some possible truths to our evolution as a species with technology is what made it worth reading. Thanks for the read."

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BEST STORY AND BEST AUTHOR I EVER GET TO KNOW

"THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL REALLY . WHEN I SAW THE FRONT I THOUGHT IT MIGHT BE SOMETHING CHILDISH BUT WHEN I READ THE AUTHERS NOT THEN I REALISED THAT I WAS COMPLETELY WRONG THIS STORY IS SO GOOD READING THIS STORY IT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE THE AUTHORS IS A VERY GOOD PERSON I WOLUD LIKE TO MEET THEM ONCE IN MY LIFE . AND ABOUT IMPROVING THIS STORY I DONT THINK ITS NEEDED TO BE IMPROVED CAUSE ITS ALREADY SO GOOD . I NEVER THOUGHT THAT THERE WOULD BE SOMEONE THIS GOOD IN REAL LIFE I WILL READ ALL YOUR STORY I AM LATELY VERY BUT STILL I WILL FIND TIME TO READ YOUR STORIES"

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Amazing

" “While reading the story, a movie of a future world played in my mind. It made me curious to read more. The part where emotions do not exist is very sad, but the author has done a great job showing future life.”"

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I hope it will make a little space in your heart

"Hello I am haru I wrote this story not to make you sad or something like that . All I want from you guys is a little attention for one stray animal and also tell other people to do this cause animals deserve so much love from us but still all they get is sadness, loneliness,tears, and very hard life without having someone to love them . I want every animals to feel like they are special not for everyone but for one person ."

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Interesting ideas

"I love animals and I can't imagine a world without them. I am eager to see what Aeirin does with these feelings. Will her robot companion feel the same?"

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