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Summary

Twenty strangers wake up on cold concrete floors, scattered across sealed rooms with no memory of how they got there, no knowledge of where they are, and no explanation for the single thing they each carry: a name tattooed on their wrist. Their own name — the only identity they are given. They are divided into five teams of four. They did not choose each other. They do not know each other. But the world they have woken into does not care about any of that. It only cares about one thing — whether they can survive it. The world is a game. Its rules reveal themselves slowly and brutally: five teams, a vast and unforgiving environment, and a structure designed to test not just strength or speed, but the limits of trust. Each player carries an ability — not magic, not power in any fantastical sense, but a heightened human skill, finely tuned and impossible to fully understand at first. Crafting. Combat. Telepathy. Intelligence. Echolocation. Low-light vision. Energy absorption. Abilities that mean nothing alone, and everything in the right hands, in the right moment, with the right people beside you. But the right people are hard to find when everyone is a stranger and survival is the only currency that matters. As the teams navigate the world they've been thrown into — a sprawling, dark, and layered landscape that is never fully explained and never fully safe — alliances begin to form across team lines. Some out of necessity. Some out of something that starts to resemble genuine trust. And some that were never real to begin with. Betrayals come quietly, the way they always do — dressed as loyalty until the moment they aren't. Players lose lives. Some lose all three. The game does not pause for grief, and the world does not reward hesitation. Not everyone will make it out.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Evara
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

No way back





The first thing Evara felt was the cold.

It crept in through the back of her neck, along her spine, and settled deep into her bones like it had always lived there. She became aware of it slowly —the way you become aware of a sound that has been playing for a long time before you actually hear it. The cold was just there, patient and absolute, as if the warmth had been pulled out of her body a long time ago and nobody had bothered to tell her. Then came the surface beneath her. Hard. Flat. Smooth in a way that wasn't natural —not wood, not stone, not earth. Something manufactured. She pressed her fingers against it without opening her eyes and felt the faint grain of poured concrete, sealed and cold as a slab.

She was lying on a floor.

That thought arrived without alarm at first. Just information. A floor. She was on a floor.

Then her brain caught up with itself.

Why am I on a floor?

Evara opened her eyes.

The ceiling above her was low and featureless — off-white panels interrupted by a single rectangular light fixture that hummed faintly, casting everything in a pale, clinical glow. The light was steady, not flickering, which somehow made it worse. It felt deliberate. Like a room that had been prepared.

She sat up slowly.

Her head swam. Not painfully, not like injury — more like the specific dizziness of someone who had been unconscious too long. Like surfacing from a sleep so deep it felt less like rest and more like absence. She pressed the heel of her palm to her temple and waited for the room to stop tilting.

When it did, she looked around.

The room was medium-sized. Maybe seven meters across, eight meters long. The walls were the same off-white as the ceiling, bare and unmarked. The floor was the same sealed concrete she'd felt beneath her fingers. There were no windows. No furniture. No doors with handles. Just four walls, a ceiling, a floor, and that humming light above her — and in the far left corner of the room, set near the ceiling, a single ventilation grate. Metal. Rectangular. Screwed in at the corners.

She was not alone.

Three other people were scattered across the floor around her, each of them in various stages of the same slow, confused awakening she had just experienced. To her left, a girl was pressing herself up onto her hands and knees, dark hair falling in a curtain around her face as she breathed in shallow, rapid pulls. To her right, closer to the wall, a boy was already sitting upright but had not yet opened his eyes — his face was tilted slightly toward the light, brow furrowed, as though he was trying to solve something behind his eyelids. And near the far wall, another boy was lying completely still on his back, one arm draped across his stomach, staring at the ceiling with an expression of absolute blankness.

None of them spoke.

For almost a full minute, the only sound in the room was the hum of the light and the soft, unsteady breathing of four people who did not know where they were.

The girl with the dark hair finally got to her feet.

She did it carefully, testing her legs before committing to them, one hand briefly touching the wall for balance before she pulled it back as if the wall had burned her. She straightened up and looked around the room with wide, dark eyes — taking in each wall, the ceiling, the vent, the light, and then each of the three other people in turn. Her expression wasn't panic. Not yet. It was something harder to name. A kind of suspended state, like a person standing at the edge of something very high, looking down, not yet falling.

She looked at her own hands.

She turned her right wrist over.

There, on the inside of her wrist, written in small, precise black letters, as though applied by something clinical and permanent:

VIVI

She stared at it. Pressed her thumb over the letters as if they might smear. They didn't. The ink — or whatever it was — sat cleanly in her skin. Not raised. Not a scar. Just letters. A name.

Her name, she realized. It must be her name. She turned it over in her head and something about it settled into place, fitting the shape of her the way a word returns to you after you've forgotten it — suddenly obvious, suddenly right.

Vivi.

She said it under her breath, barely sound at all.

Evara had seen the girl check her wrist. The gesture — turning the wrist over, that specific pause — triggered something and she looked down at her own hands without thinking. She turned her right wrist up.

EVARA

She read it twice. Then she pressed two fingers to it, not to smear it, but to feel it. Like she was checking a pulse. The letters were real. Permanent. Whoever had put them there had done it deliberately.

That thought — whoever had put them there — sent a cold thread of something through her chest that was sharper than the general cold of the floor.

She got to her feet.

Across the room, the boy near the far wall — the one who had been staring at the ceiling — finally moved. He sat up in one controlled motion, and his eyes moved immediately around the room in a methodical sweep. Not panicked. Not slow. Purposeful, the way a person looks around when they're already categorizing. His gaze landed on the vent first. Then the light Then each person. Then the walls. Then the floor.

He turned his wrist over almost as an afterthought.

CALEB

He read it once and said nothing. Just tucked the information away somewhere and kept looking at the room.

The last one to fully wake was Draco.

He didn't surface gracefully. He came up fast, the way people do when their body decides for them — gasping, rolling onto his side, one hand slamming flat against the floor as if he needed to anchor himself to something solid. He stayed like that for a moment, on one hand and one knee, breathing hard, before the gasping slowed and he became still again. Then he pushed himself upright. He was tall — that was the first thing the others registered about him. Broad through the shoulders. He turned around once, taking in the room with a jaw that was set very tight, and then he looked at his wrist.

DRACO

He stared at it a beat longer than the others had. Then he looked up. His eyes moved to the three people already standing, and for a moment none of them said anything at all.

Four strangers in a sealed room.

Four names tattooed on four wrists.

The light hummed.

It was Caleb who spoke first.

"Does anyone know where we are?"

His voice was quiet and even, not much louder than necessary to cross the room. He was looking at no one in particular when he asked — still scanning the walls as if the question were more inventory than conversation. "No." Evara said it without hesitation. Vivi shook her head slowly, eyes moving between the others. Draco said nothing. He was looking at the vent. Caleb nodded, as though the answers confirmed something rather than confirmed nothing. He walked to the nearest wall and pressed his palm flat against it. He moved along it slowly, not randomly — methodically, section by section. Listening. Feeling for variation in temperature or texture. He did the same on the adjacent wall. He crouched at one point and examined the seam where the wall met the floor, running a finger along it before standing again. "Concrete walls," he said, more to himself than anyone. "Same material as the floor. Monolithic, no joins I can find. Either poured as a single structure or the joins have been sealed."

"What does that mean?" Vivi asked.

"It means there's no weak point in the walls we can use." He said it matter-of-factly. "Not easily."

Draco finally looked away from the vent. "There's no door."

"There was one," Caleb said. He pointed to the wall opposite the vent. "Look at the floor there. The dust pattern — there's a rectangular clearing about a meter wide. Something stood there or opened there. It's been sealed."

They all looked. The difference was subtle — a faint ghost of a rectangle in the film of dust on the floor near the base of that wall — but it was there. Evara didn't know how he'd seen it. She hadn't.

"So someone put us here," Draco said. It wasn't a question. Nobody answered, because there was no answer to give.

For a while they just existed in the same space, each of them orbiting the room in their own way, each of them turning over what little they had.

Evara stood in the center of the room and closed her eyes.

She wasn't sure exactly why she did it — some instinct, something that felt natural in a way she couldn't fully explain. With her eyes shut, the room changed. The hum of the light became more distinct, textured. She became aware of the specific acoustic quality of the space — the way sound moved in it, the flatness of it, the slight echo off the far wall versus the near ones. She clicked her tongue once, soft and almost inaudible, and listened. She did it again. Slightly louder.

The room gave itself back to her in sound. The vent was definitely in the upper left corner — she could feel the faint difference in how the sound returned from that direction, the slight hollow quality of a space that opened into something else. The sealed door-space on the far wall returned sound differently too. Denser. Filled in.

She opened her eyes.

Vivi was watching her. "What are you doing?"

Evara wasn't sure how to explain it. "Listening," she said.

"With your eyes closed?"

"The vent," Evara said instead of answering the question directly. "It's the only opening. Everything else is solid."

Caleb, who had apparently been listening to the exchange, looked at the vent again. "I know," he said. "I've been working on that."

Then they heard it.

It came from outside — beyond the vent, beyond whatever walls separated this room from wherever outside was. At first it was ambiguous. A sound that could have been many things. A bang. A scrape. Then a voice — sharp and wordless, just tone, not language — and then another sound that was unmistakably impact. Something hitting something with force. Then a shout, cut short.

Then a different kind of silence. Not the silence of an empty place. The silence after something happens.

The four of them had gone completely still.

Vivi's hand had come up to her mouth without her seeming to notice. Draco had turned to face the vent directly, shoulders squared. Evara's eyes had gone to it automatically. Caleb had not moved at all, but something in his face had sharpened.

"People," Vivi said, from behind her hand. Her voice was very small.

"People fighting," Draco said.

Another sound from outside. A rhythmic scrape — like something heavy being dragged. Then nothing.

Caleb spoke first after that. "We need to get out of this room."

No one disagreed.

The vent grate was roughly forty centimeters wide and thirty tall — large enough to pass through, though not comfortably. It was set into the upper part of the wall, close to where the wall met the ceiling, perhaps two and a half meters from the floor. It was secured by four screws, one at each corner, with a simple flat-head pattern.

The problem was reaching it.

"We need height," Draco said, looking up at it. He was the tallest but even he was a half-meter short of reaching it standing.

"One of us climbs on someone else's shoulders," Caleb said.

"We still need something to remove the screws," Evara said. "We can't use our fingers."

Vivi, who had been quiet for the last few minutes, was looking at her own hands. She'd been picking at the hem of her sleeve — whatever she was wearing, all of them were wearing the same thing, a kind of simple grey utility outfit, thin and close-fitting, not particularly warm — and she'd pulled a small length of the fabric free. She was turning it in her fingers, thinking.

"The buckle," she said.

They looked at her.

She pointed at the thin strap running across her left forearm — a utilitarian band, part of the outfit, with a small flat metal buckle. She worked it free from the strap and held it up between two fingers. It was about two centimeters wide, flat, with a narrow edge. "It's not a screwdriver," she said, "but the edge might catch the slot if the screws aren't too tight."

Caleb looked at it. He held out his hand and she gave it to him. He examined it for a moment, turning it, testing the edge with his thumb. "It'll work if they haven't been over-torqued," he said. "It'll slip a lot. We'll have to be patient."

"So someone climbs on someone's shoulders and uses that to get the screws out," Draco said, putting it together. He looked at Evara and Vivi. "One of you should go up. Lighter."

"I'll do it," Evara said.

Getting her up took a few tries. Draco braced against the wall, back flat to it, hands laced together at his knee. Evara stepped into his hands and he lifted — and she grabbed for the wall with her fingertips to stabilize herself as she climbed up to his shoulders. She was not graceful about it. Her knee caught his ear on the way up. He said nothing. She got upright on his shoulders, one hand flat against the ceiling for balance, and looked at the vent up close for the first time.

Four screws. Standard flat-head. She pressed her thumb against the nearest one — it didn't move, but it wasn't sunk deep. Set with a tool but not aggressively.

Caleb passed the buckle up to her and she took it with her free hand.

The first attempt slipped immediately. The edge caught the slot for a fraction of a second and then skated off, her knuckle scraping the grate. She reset. Tried again. The buckle caught better this time — she felt it seat into the slot and applied slow, steady pressure. The screw resisted. She held the pressure. Under her, Draco was very still, holding his breath.

The screw gave. A single millimeter at first, and then with a grudging rotation.

"It's moving," she said.

Nobody celebrated. They just waited.

It took twelve minutes to get all four screws out. Her wrist ached. The buckle had slipped seventeen times. Two of the screws had been significantly tighter than the others, and for one of them she'd had to ask Caleb to press up on her foot from below to give her more leverage. Draco hadn't moved once. His breathing stayed controlled the entire time.

When the last screw came free, the grate shifted inward slightly. Evara caught it before it could fall and passed it down to Vivi, who took it and set it quietly on the floor. The opening exhaled a faint breath of air. Cooler than the room. Carrying something in it — humidity, and beneath that, something organic. Earth. Growing things.

They went through in silence, one at a time.

Caleb first — Draco's idea, on the basis that if there was anything unknown on the other side, Caleb was most likely to process it quickly and make a useful decision about it. Evara gave him a boost from below and he pulled himself through with his arms and disappeared into the dark of the duct. A few seconds passed. Then his voice came back, hushed: "It's short. Maybe three meters. Then it opens. Come through."

Vivi went next. Then Evara. Draco came last, barely fitting his shoulders through the opening, moving slowly, pulling himself along the duct on his forearms. The metal shifted and creaked under his weight and he paused each time it did, listening for any response from beyond. None came. He kept moving.

The duct opened into the outside world through a grate at ground level — the duct itself angled downward through the wall, discharging at the base of a structure they couldn't fully see in the darkness. Caleb had already removed this second grate by the time the others arrived behind him. It was loose. Perhaps it had been left that way.

That thought occurred to Evara and she filed it somewhere uncomfortable.

They came through one by one and straightened up and looked at where they were.

The building they had been inside was behind them now — a low, featureless block of concrete, no different on the outside than it had felt from within. No markings. No lights. No indication of what it was or who had built it. It squatted in the dark like something that had always been there.

But ahead of them —

The forest.

It began perhaps ten meters from where they stood, and it was enormous. the kind of vast that presses on the chest slightly when you look into it. The trees were tall and dense, their canopy somewhere far above them in the darkness, the light from the sky — a sky that was deep grey-blue and starless, neither night nor fully day — filtering through in fragments. The forest floor was dark. Not pitch black, but the kind of dark that moves, that rearranges itself the longer you look at it. Undergrowth thick at the bases of the trunks, thinning in the middle distances and then thickening again further in until the trees became shapes and the shapes became suggestions and the suggestions became nothing.

It breathed. That was the impression Evara had — that it was breathing, in the way that large living things breathe, slowly and without urgency, entirely indifferent to the four people standing at its edge.

None of them spoke for a long moment.

Then Vivi said, very quietly: "Where are we?"

The forest did not answer. Behind them, from somewhere else in the complex of concrete buildings they had just escaped, there was a sound. Distant. A voice — then more than one. Then the specific silence that follows a confrontation.

Draco turned once to look back at the buildings, then turned forward again.

"Into the trees," he said.

They went.