Mind Watcher

"I like the story very much. My one reservation: The ending seemed not so mach a story ending as the end of a chapter."

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Review

"It's a very intriguing story so far. I can only hope the rest of the books complete this beginning."

Mindwatcher rewiew

"Greatly constructed story, but looks like an unfinished work, there is an end of chapter and that is also end of the story"

Mind watcher

"The story is incomplete builds up to a crescendo that falls flat at the ending like the start of another chapter to explain why his best friend tried to hurt him or what happens between him and the girl poor ending if it is "