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"Fantastic first three chapters. I was sucked right in with Lucia feeling like she wasn't part of their world and the forced marriage. But then, oh, the mysterious man in the raven mask. Oh yes! The tension is taut throughout on various levels and the details are luxurious as it should be in the world of the rich. I can't wait for more."

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