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Jojo

"I Loved every single second of this amazing story and I just couldn't stop reading it! Two broken hearts that found their way to each other and became one. ❤️"

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Iron Heart

"What happens when 2 different lifes collide, one dark the other light! Read this story and you will find out! Trust me you won't be able to put it down! ALOT of drama, pain and heartbreak but at the end all worth it! Loved this story and you will to!"

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Iron Heart

"Good story. Glad they were able to overcome all their differences "

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OMG

"This book is disgusting...ly adorable! In an effort to be fully transparent, I debated with myself over putting an ad on Craig's List seeking to assassinate Kane after the hospital scene and for making me cry. I'm glad the sane side of my emotions won out though because this ended up being a beautiful book <3"

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Get your tissues ready

"If the road to hell is paved with good intentions, what do you find on the way back? This is an emotional rollercoaster of miscommunication and assumptions. You will definitely cry, and sometimes you'll want to throttle these characters for their flaws that keep getting in the way. A beautiful story about seeing people for who they are. Not their power, money, or the tangible things that society measures us by, but the heart and soul of a person. Whether you can stand by the flaws and weather the storm of expectations together, or crumble from the stress others put on you."

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“Where Broken Souls Collide and Something Powerful Begins”

" This story completely pulled me in from the very first line, “She was wrong.” That alone sets the tone, and from there it just grips you tighter with every paragraph. The way the author builds Elena’s journey is honestly beautiful. You feel her pain, her strength, and that quiet determination to rebuild herself piece by piece. And then there’s Kane, intense, guarded, and layered in a way that makes you want to unravel him slowly. The chemistry between them isn’t rushed. It simmers, it builds, and when it hits, it truly hits. The tension, the emotional depth, the push and pull, it’s all written so effortlessly. What really stands out is how this isn’t just a romance. It’s raw, it’s haunting, and it carries weight. Both characters come with scars, and the story doesn’t shy away from that. Instead, it leans into it, giving us something deeper than a typical love story. The stakes feel real, the past feels heavy, and the emotions stay with you even after you’ve finished reading. And honestly, this author never misses. Every story she writes has that same addictive quality, strong characters, intense emotions, and plots that keep you hooked from start to finish. You can always count on her to deliver something memorable. If you haven’t already, you need to check out her other stories too. Trust me, once you start, you won’t want to stop. She has a way of pulling you into her worlds and making you feel everything, and that’s what makes her writing so special."

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Wow

"I’m still in the middle of reading this story on Inkitt, but I already need to talk about it. The MMC is absolutely dreamy—the kind of character who feels like he could burn the world down for someone... just not for the one he actually loves, which makes everything so much more intense. What really pulls me in is the contrast between them. They come from completely different worlds, and somehow that clash works so well. It adds a constant tension that builds with every chapter. The author has been doing an amazing job slowly unraveling new details, piece by piece, and I’m completely hooked. Every chapter leaves me wanting more, and I honestly can’t wait to see how they’re going to make it work. Because at this point, I have no idea how they’ll end up together, and if they will stay together—but I need them to. Thank you @crazydiamond another amazing story. "

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Iron heart

"I like the way Kane is handling this girl. I really these two hope it won't take long for them to kiss"

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I’m good

"The story was good until around the last 100 pages. I just couldn’t continue after that. At least when he hurt her it was him thinking he was doing something good for him. She on the other hand is cruel, spiteful, and wanting to dominate over him just because she has money again. There is a line when writing. If you let the writing go too overboard with the main character acting cruel to someone loving then the reader looses all connection with that character. Id honestly be fine with her being run over by a bus than him end up with her. "

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