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"The book is fast paced and straight forward. I enjoyed it a lot."

Captive heart

"Impressive"

Love

"Great green beans in a sec to the bowl of my eyes I love you 😍 I am terrified that you will never see this one didn't happen to you are you are not the same time as I thought that you would have to be no longer in charge for this one didn't have a question "

There's light at the end of every dark tunnel

"The story was really good and so was the plot . The ending was fabulous. But a lot of grammatical and punctuational errors ."

captive hearts

"The story was great but it was a bit rushed. I think you should add more details. Other than that, it was amazing. :)"

Cute

"Verryy cute story its for children, i like it its innocent hhh"

Laiza

"Why is life so cruel, poor child"

Great story

"Great and interesting piece"

book review

"it was a great story. i loved reading it, haha thank you for giving me a story to read this is definitely in my favorites"

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Captive hearts

"Lost track in some points... Even if english is not my first language i notice a lot of grammaticals issues... The plot is good but maybe more developes in the story would be good..."

Superb

"I'm very much stick to the story"

Really cute story

"It needs to be edited but really sweet story. I kinda wish it would of answered some of the unanswered things but still a really good story."

Ms N M

"Nice to read"

Good Concept

"Though, not very well written Captive Hearts still manages to have a good concept. With more work put into the overall writing of the piece, Captive Hearts could be so much more. Emerald Jones is the daughter of the third richest man in the world. She’s annoyed at a new story showing the latest victim of the Ransom King, a 12 year old girl, enjoyed the experience. All his his victims have enjoyed the experience. We all can guess where this story goes next."