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Very good

"Nice story "

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I find it interesting

"So far I bit confused on what exactly the main story is and where it’s taking place. I understand a bit and get the general feeling of it but I think it would be better if some wording was a bit more specific. Personally I like fantasy romance novels so this was a first for me to read and I found it interesting, I’m excited to see where this book will take me. Another thing I think it would be better if you added all the chapters into just one book instead of making several books or people might get a little confused as to why you have many duplicate. "

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