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A matter of authority

"Love it n now I can’t wait n c what happened w archer n guel mom"

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Love

"Love the story so far "

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A matter of authority; submission in the boardroom

"IMPRESSIVE I don't like that asher is older than geul But I love the plot "

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A matter of authority

"If I could have read more l would love ❤️ 😍 it i don't want to go 😫 because it's getting hotter than he'll Keep it coming it's great 👍 "

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I love the book like madd

"Liking everything entirely Plot is mad like hell And im always sat for an erotica "

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Beautifully written, highly recommend.

"This is by far one of my favorite reads! The plot is amazing, and it thickens with every chapter! Keep up the amazing work! 🖤"

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It is so good

"I like how guel is a richer than asher but I don't like how asher is older than guel "

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Mr. Black

"What on earth is he doing? Playing with fire is what that is! Once Asher finds out he has been lying this whole time, he is done for!! 🫢😬"

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Impressive

"Good one"

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Asher

"Enjoyed reading the story so far and looking forward to the rest of the story later. "

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Slow but steady

"Even though there is a slow move of the plot, it is steady and partly realistic. The relationships are building and the sexual scenes are at least interesting. Good work."

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Characters

"I like where the story is going I just feel we haven't been able to learn about the characters personally. I mean things like where does Girl actually come from? How is it that he has free reign to do as he pleases? Why is Asher alone? Stuff like that"

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