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What is your opinion?
Woah
"I found the story all in all very interesting; maybe if you added more dialogue etc it would've made us care about the characters more. Still, that sounds terrifying, good job!"
Yikes!
"I haven't read a lot of horror, but I very much enjoyed this. The concept of the strange videos was very intriguing. I was on the edge of my seat to the very end. The reason that I marked it down was because of the lack of dialogue. I think that if you added some specific dialogue it would help with the pacing and cause the reader to care more about the characters. Still, all in all, I loved it."
