400 chapters read
Love this
"Loving this book, confiding in the beginning but I can’t put it down now "
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273 chapters read
Intriguing
"When first starting this book it is very confusing until you start reading it as first person (like you are aria) . Sometimes the transmissions are a little hard to follow however despite that you can't help but to be drawn into the plot. Now when the notices come it has been updated I open them before it stop sending the notification.. lol "
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123 chapters read
The rejected omega wanted by the alpha king
"I hope everything works out for them and the gold corrects and they can rebuild there lives find peace and happiness "
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66 chapters read
Makes me want to read other stories by this author
"The style and articulate phrases are making me want to read more. I think this author may be my new favorite living author. "
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195 chapters read
Good read
"Great read, the tast ortrip they’re on is a bit confusing and hard to picture but I like the story line"
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27 chapters read
Rejected omega chosen by the Lycan king
"I like the plot.The love story that appears between 2 people that didn't ask for it but learn to accept it . The author needs to introduce a proper dialogue between characters, otherwise the readers will get bored and refuse to read any longer. What I don't like is the absence of their wolves , a real dialogue between them."
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99 chapters read
Confusing
"I am lost in this book."
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119 chapters read
I tried
"I got to page 655 before i just couldnt deal anymore. The characters are like robots with no emotions. The plot could have been interesting but the AI use ruined it. Paragraphs repeat in the same chapter, chapters repeat the previous chapters framed differently, it saying “and the fire does what it does” or “the mountain is still doing mountain things outside” kind of word fluff constantly. The entire story probably could have been written into 300 pages if written well. It started out ok then got worse and worse. "
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106 chapters read
Complicated
"Constant repetition of many paragraphs throughout the entire story. There are certain aspects to the story that makes it interesting but there are many outliers of this story that doesn't make it actually good enough. I kept trying to perceive this into a mind movie and the details were not recognizable of what could have actually happened within the entire storyline."
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12 chapters read
Wrong style of writing
"It ́s impossible to read a big story like this in this writing style. The conversations are without emotions and some sentences just don ́t make sense. It ́s annoying and a waste of time"
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