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"From the very first chapter, “Neuron,” the story dives straight into a dark world of secret experiments, deadly mutations, and high-stakes missions. The concept of the Axolotl Squad is executed really well, making the world feel intense and immersive. The action is fast-paced and cinematic, but what makes it stand out is the characters flawed, loyal, and easy to connect with. Their dynamics add real depth to the chaos around them. Overall, it’s a gripping mix of sci-fi, horror, and tactical action that keeps you hooked. Definitely worth a read. Highly recommended."

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A good Sci-Fi Horror and Tactical Action

"From the very first chapter, "Neuron," the author throws you into a high-stakes, ruthless world of dark government conspiracies and terrifying mutations. The world-building around the black-ops "Axolotl Squad" is phenomenal, offering an immersive look into a universe where science has evolved into nightmare fuel and operatives are forced to clean up catastrophic messes. Beyond the visceral, cinematic action and terrifying anomalies, the story shines through its deeply complex characters. The squad members are flawed but fiercely loyal, bringing a much-needed emotional weight and camaraderie to the brutal, fast-paced combat sequences. It’s dark, unapologetically thrilling, and hooks you immediately. Its highly recommended!"

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"I've been reading this from the very beginning. I know the author in person and he is very enthusiastic about this project. Trust me, he keeps learning and every new patch to this e-Novel has only got better. I personally liked the whole story building and characters (I don't like the MC as much as I'm interested in others, I hope my opinion changes in due time). It's still very raw and needs more details and pacing feels a little too fast for now. Nothing much to worry about though, just needs to slow down and give some gray areas for the readers to process stuff. Overall, It's a captivating "First Project" (officially)."

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