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Very Unique.

"Unlike most "supernatural" stories, this one offers a crisp and unique plot, a relatable protagonist, and an impressive writing style. Although a little shorter than expected, it was a delight to read and a pastime that is definitely worthwhile. Perhaps an epilogue/sequel will tie in nicely - seeing the protagonist's life entirely before death and his future. Will definitely read another book out of this series, if one is made. Well done!"

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Engrossed

"Captivating story with a great plot.. "

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The devil's chosen

"Really liked the story line of this book totally different from other books ive read. But that ending, come on really need more. "

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GIVE ME A SECOND ONEE

"Ive been looking for a book like this for a while. This was amazing and you should definitely continue writing 👌 👍 "

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The Devil's Chosen

"Fantastic Story! Well thought out plotline that is unique and original. I enjoyed reading this book very much and I am looking forward to reading book 2...at least I hope there is another book to this one."

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The devils chosen

"Dudr that ending was N0T enough"

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The Devil’s Chosen

"I am really enjoying this book so far! I love the concept. I’m a really picky reader, but I don’t really have any complaints about it. It is definitely worth a read. "

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Intrigued

"Honestly, going into this one I didn't expect much. However, after reading through to the second chapter, I was intrigued by the author's style and the main character. I've always loved fantasy books, and being new to the site I've been reading some, though this one takes the cake. Don't let the low quality cover image push you away, it's worth a read!"

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Great

"You begin with the description of a really horrible scene in the main character’s home. This is, unfortunately, something that many children nowadays can relate to and the way you have written it feels so real and relatable. The topic is deep and serious. And the anger that the character feels is perfectly natural. However, you seem to take your story in a different direction and use this first scene simply as the background of the character’s choices and actions. And you have done this perfectly. You have a great style of writing and what you have written so far is excellent. Keep it up."

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The devil's chosen

"I don't get it when u choose to write about 5 and 8 Yr old children fighting, just doesn't seem right to me....maybe you should of used more mature characters, and it would have more of a repotoir with adults! Great idea just a bit immature..."

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