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"Oh what a tangled web we weave when we sleep with a man and his son"

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Not too spicy...just right

"I liked the length of the story, and the descriptions of characters, scenes and emotions, it wasn't overly done and that's appreciated. The kidnapping scene doesn't fit and there's no resolution to something that is so huge in a person's life, it felt awkwardly placed and to read. I look forward to more stories from this author."

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