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Whew hell of a ride with a unique plot

"Fantastic quick burn. This is a fantasy brought to life for sure. I loved every chapter. Great pace fun plot and interesting characters with sprinkles AND a cherry on top."

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Exactly as advertised

"If this is your genre, then this is a great, fast little read."

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Threesome except Paul

"This was so hot and interesting, but it’s wasn’t clear why they were so mean to her that she had to run away ?"

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