What is your opinion?
A perspective
"I always love reading things based off something that I feel I've seen, or, something that's the polar opposite, something I've barely experienced. This was a great short story, though I do feel that you could maybe flesh out some of the story, to add more emotion to it in general. There were some very slight grammar things, but really, you wrote this story very well. I wish you the best of luck in your future writing endeavours!"
Honest...
"Such an honest account of a girl that has it all, except that she faces serious abuse… It was sad to read but I do believe that such stories are necessary in our society, to understand better what people go through, to raise awareness for this issue. With regard to the writing style, I would suggest the author to go a bit “slower”, to use a writing style that is perhaps more suggestive and uses language a bit more creatively to describe the abuse and the situation. Besides this I think the topic is a brave one, and I think it would be great if the author would continue writing and posting it here on Inkitt!"
