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What is your opinion?
SO MANY TWISTS
"Aaaah I love all these twists and the suspense that comes along with it. It makes this series so exciting."
Creative writing style
"I read another story by this author, “Tamir”, and I have to say this one is even better! I absolutely love the writing style, with short, almost poetic sentences. That’s the thing I personally look for the most and I found it in this story. It is highly suspenseful, in fact it kept me reading for a long time. One thing I believe could be improved is the depth of the characters. At the moment the reader has no idea about their background, their personalities, their feelings. This would be interesting to add, I believe. But besides this I think this story is already well on its way and I recommend it!"
