#TeamTamir

"This is really cool. Tamir told us his story in the first book but now we get to live it out and learn a bit more about the world around him, both under and over the water. I like how Tamir struggles with himself and with the possibility of greatness that comes with massive doubt on his part. It's really cool to see."

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Mermaids!

"This is a rich fantasy story. I enjoyed the creative ideas on mermaids and the unique world of water that the author created. Good job on building up mystery and suspense in the introduction. However, I do think that the chapters that come after that are a bit less interesting in comparison. Maybe it could be an idea to make the conversation a bit shorter, and to introduce some elements of the plot already there. I also think it would make the novel richer if the author would be a bit more descriptive about the environment the story takes place. It’s a completely new world, after all, and the reader (at least I was!) would like to know the sounds, the sights, the smells… but all in all I enjoyed the mermaid characters, the way that humans are portrayed here as “strange” and the writing style!"