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What is your opinion?
Alternate Version
"Ooh, I've never seen an alternate stroy about an original. That was a super creative idea, especially for a world so vast in the One Hundred series. I love it."
Charming and powerful
"The very beginning of this story is effective, intriguing and it leaves a mark. I love how the story is dynamic throughout; it progresses quickly, but is yet full of details. You have powerful narratives which carry strong messages and this is a big plus. Your descriptions are also very influential and compelling. I love how you end the last Chapter. That one word. The last word. It is such an ordinary word, which carries a very, very deep meaning behind it. You have a tendency to do this with words and that is amazing. I hope you will continue this story."
