So far so great

"First of all, I love how dynamically this story begins. It is intense and invokes strong emotions from the very start. You have great, vivid descriptions and I felt some kind of danger from the first paragraph. Lace is driven by revenge, while Terrian, the free shifter has his own (or someone else’s) aim to complete. I love that the story is written from both their perspectives and I sense that Terrian will find his own purpose as the story progresses. It may be completely different than Blain’s one. Ending the second Chapter with a cliffhanger is a great move. This story has great potential and got me really curious about what will happen next."