What is your opinion?
Great potential
"This story really caught my attention. I am greatly interested in how it is going to unfold. It is kind of dark, mysterious and a bit frightening. The thought that the character has spent 15 years imprisoned, chained and used is fearsome enough for itself. But I can see that it is going to be a complex story. The characters seem to have created they own life, a life of dreams, and that life is probably what gets them going, what helps them live another day. And there is a glimpse of hope in the second half of this Chapter you published. I love how you began this and I have great expectations of this story."
