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This should be the Advet

"You are quietly enjoying a mindless mobile game when an advert flickers across your screen. An inviting storyline, good graphics... a link to read the rest of the story. Sound familiar, a quick search of the title via search engine shows you that there are 1200 chapters and the story is still unfinished, there is no closure, no wrap of arcs, a forever evolving storyline, with endless new ones. This should be the advert! I really enjoyed this short story, thank you!"

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Nice story

"yup we all have that critic we hate but it makes us better some hate us using AI and i don't blame them but its everywhere you can't escape from it its like if i was to play my character Johnathan Noire i would asks the people behind the ai why why add this feature everywhere its the same here why won't they accept your werewolf story. You have more to this serial novel killer story, don't end it here, keep it going."

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