What is your opinion?
improve
"the plot was good but i think you can improve the story more and the end was something i felt like you didnt went in detail , many things were there in which you can go in deep but still the story was heart warming "
"the plot was good but i think you can improve the story more and the end was something i felt like you didnt went in detail , many things were there in which you can go in deep but still the story was heart warming "