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Deliciously Dark

"I have a weakness for stories layered with medical and scientific terminology. Your story is a great example of that. It's written in an engaging yet also explicit manner which draws you right in. Additionally the dual life makes you curious about possible reactions of his family to when the bubble inevitably bursts and he is suspected or even discovered. Will they be disgusted or horrified. All those questions those delicious possibilities you cannot help but consider from the first couple chapters is what names an awesome story to me. Keep writing please. "

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Might make you squeamish in the best way possible

"The Architect’s Ledger starts off with an opening that invites the reader to try and fill in certain blanks, while also immersing themselves in a high-stakes scene. You’re rooting for someone at first, and then you realize... “oh.” “Ohhhhh.” It had me squeamish by the second chapter. And in the best way possible. The details were too vivid to miss and even as someone who finds it hard to see pictures in my head, I could imagine every single thing. It was almost as if I was there. It’s not for the faint of heart—but it’s definitely worth a read and then another. And it’s it’s just started. I can’t wait to see how the author works her magic on this one. "

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