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The romance hits you like a fist

"As someone who grew up in a town where 3 things were always true (1. There's a race this weekend be it horses/cars/or dirt bikes 2. Mrs Betty Sue and the women's fellowship are selling cakes and lunch plates after church on Sunday 3.boys like girls and anything else is wrong) I feel like this is a really good representation of discovering an alternate sexuality in a southern small town. The slow burn was just slow enough to count the fist fights spoke volumes even before the protagonists understood it. The spice was spicy. And over all it was just plain good. "

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Dirt and rage

"I absolutely love reading this it was sooo fun 💙"

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Great

"Great story line, very well written. Keep writing more like this! "

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Enemies to lovers

"Great story, original plot. Really enjoyed it"

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Great story

"I enjoyed reading this story sooo much ,loved the slow build up,the hate that slowly turned into support,care and eventually love. Definitely worth the read. Congratulations author for your amazing skills. Can't wait for Cole and Mason's story. I feel like those two are going to be my favourite 🤭♥️👌🏼"

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Dirt and rage

"Please update, we are missing the continuity of the story."

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It's nice, but author been holding out too much

"Nice, author needs to be too open and create more room to the guys"

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Beautiful

"I like this one a lot. Keep it coming, please 😍 "

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Good plot and all, but its obviously written by ai

"Pros - good plot - its slow burn - actual tension and stuff - good, fast read Cons - so obviously written by ai - otherwise, the writing style drives me out of my mind - ending was rushed - manufactured heart-tugger No offense to the "author" but if you wrote it yourself, it would be much better! And with less typos!"

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