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Bonne histoire

"Bonne histoire, pas mal de pleurs à la lecture. Le chapitre bonus par contre est superflu. Il aurait été mieux placé un peu avant quand il lui avoue qu'il l'aimait depuis longtemps. Mais sans répéter l'accident de la première fois à la patinoire."

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Cute love story!

"Lovely story with the right amount of heartbreak and redemption. Good writing style and editing! Recommend to read! Thank you for sharing your story with us!"

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Okay...I'm invested

"I’m honestly blown away by how beautiful this story is so far. You really draw readers in from the very beginning and take us on such an immersive journey with Ellie—it genuinely feels like we’re right there with her. I also love how the side characters aren’t just in the background; getting little glimpses into their lives adds so much depth to the story. The chapters are on the longer side for my personal reading pace (I tend to enjoy around 1500–2000 words), but I’m still really invested and excited to keep going. I can’t wait to see how everything unfolds—especially Carson 👀 I need to know what caused that rift 😁 Such amazing work so far!"

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