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What is your opinion?
Love the tension
"This story is based on family things as far as i understand and if you like this type of genra then this is going to be so much entertaining and you will not regret it. Personally i think i find this cute😊🤍"
Enjoyable and well written
"I really liked how you expressed your characters, especially Hana. The way you showed her emotions and inner feelings made her feel very real and relatable. I also loved her character development—seeing her begin to change after watching people roller skating was a subtle but meaningful moment. The story’s focus on family and sibling struggles added depth and made it even more engaging."
