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Thrilling and Quirky

"Reminiscent of authors like Jim Butcher and Jonathan Stroud, this excerpt wastes no time in seizing the reader and carrying them along for the ride. Adam Saint is a quirky character that paints a gritty, yet humorous picture of the world he calls home. The supporting characters are equally sound, even Adam's mentor and uncle, Pete, who is only seen through brief glimpses of Adam's narration. Every aspect of the world, from the chalk runes and creatures of the otherworld, to the details of Portland and the grubby Lester Weisman, meld together for a well grounded and believable setting. Extremely well done! I look forward to one day reading more."

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