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Great

"Love it can’t wait to read more"

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The saphire

"I enjoy the book"

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"The author did such an amazing job here. Good job! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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One of water

"I will recommend this book to anyone when it is finished. I am enjoying it very much. Please finish it soon. "

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The Sovereign - the One of Water Book.....

"Amazing book!! So ready for more ❤️"

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Awesome

"Simply amazing "

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When will there be more

"More updates"

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Keep on going!

"It amazing I wish I would write more"

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Great

"This is a mysterious, dangerous story, full of strange events and emotions that overwhelm the reader. The moment Maya’s friends start disappearing, she starts fearing about who is going to be next. And I, as a reader, had that fear myself, together with worry for her. But it was different for me, as the reader, since, from the very beginning, I was able to read about and “see” the horrors that the girls who disappear were going through. That made the story all the more intense. I was terrified and relieved at the same time when Ramiel “saved” Maya. But he immediately crushed her hopes by saying it will not last long. And I was surprised that Aella turned out to be Ramiel’s sister. This story has great potential and I would love to read more. You have a great style of writing, which makes the whole story all the more enjoyable."

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Good so far

"Super good "

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