What is your opinion?
Nice!
"I loved the idea of the dating website, its consequences, and the relationship between Jezzabel and Scarlett. Especially this relationship and Adam's positive response to it. I also enjoyed the setting with the precise paintings etc. I'm afraid I skipped some parts seeing as I'm not into erotica, but otherwise it was a simple and nice plot. I also liked the fact that you had hardly any grammar mistakes and the writing style was fast and free. Everything was really well written. The only thing I think you could have improved was really the hook of the story. Well done!"
Not what I expected
"A well written story, short and to the point. Since I don't read erotica I can't say if it's somewhat original (everything has elements of something else). But it was nice."
A decent idea, but execution could use work
"This, to me, seems like a decent idea that never fully takes off. It progresses far to quickly into the sex, so much so that it feels rushed. It is not easy to walk the line between porn and erotica, but it feels like you wanted to do so (which important in its own right). I think you would have a much richer story if you slow down the pace, add more detail and tension, and give more telling over showing of the sex. We could see more sensuality if maybe Scarlett introduces him to Jezz, and he experiments with non sexual kitten play first before going farther. Her being shy and worried beforehand, and him eventually being able to get her into her headspace. How would it change things if she got so deep into her petspace that she does not speak or handle his clothes as a human?"
