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"Time to review! I won’t say much as I am not done with the whole book yet BUT the way fantasy and humor are balanced in this book is just so good. Keep writing!!"

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Lightning girl

"It's nice to meet a girl who can destroy (at least) a room with only her anger. The design of the FL and ML is strong and deep imo. But for my part, I would have preferred that the ML stayed mysterious a while longer, so as to be more pleasantly surprised. Otherwise, the story is strong overall for now, with a lot of 2nd degree and funny moments. The action scenes set in wide landscapes are breathtaking."

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